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People won't care if you go missing.

They won't care if the police find your corpse the next day.

You won't care because no one else cares, and it hurts to know that.


However, I care.

I care if you never see sunlight again.

I care if visiting your funeral will give you a peaceful afterlife,

even if going means going alone.

I care because no one else cares, and you need to know that.


So please don't kill yourself tonight.

If you do, then no one will truly ever care, except me.

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Please Don't Kill Yourself Tonight by xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx

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Em0------gIrL Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks for making me cry
i really love it
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echosinthedark13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Could I have permission to do something inspired by this if I give credit?
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, send me the link though. I wanna see it. :)
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LucasRune Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Writer
Good capture.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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40ozspawn Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
You are AWESOME! Nice words to the world...
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :iconfloatingorangeplz:
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soldierrofmisfortune Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
love it, in every way, brutally honest, but still comforting at the personal level
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.:)
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loverdearestt Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student General Artist
I love this. <3
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :aww:
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boogy-man964 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
well ok, but no promises about tomorrow
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:ohnoes: Not ever!
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Aviada Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
In my opinion, saying that "You won't care because no one else cares, and it hurts to know that." to a person with suicidal thoughts isn't going to help, more likely to give even more reason to end everything. What's the point to live if nobody (among the people they know) cares about them? Also, if somebody speaks about wishing to die, it might be not pity/attention they seek, but their own way to say they need help. Just my thoughts.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The part, "You won't care because no one else cares, and it hurts to know that." is in a person contemplating sucide.
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Aviada Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
But I look at the "I care because no one else cares, and you need to know that." part and would you really say that to anyone who wants to kill himself/herself? That no one else cares?
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
It's really complicated.
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darkcentaur Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I personally associated this part with the fact that much of the people around a depressive person do their best to ignore that. There are not many people who really want to help someone as soon as they began to understand how difficult it is.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting....
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x-nini-x Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011   Writer
love it :)
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :)
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x-nini-x Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011   Writer
Your welcome :P
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Nenastia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I like it, really
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:aww: Thank you!
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lyratyto Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Aw ~
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kalynvalcourt Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
this was really inspiring, Thanks for shareing.... I care for people it makes me sad that so many people are herting in are world :(
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. :aww:
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aXsKezia Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
As heartless as this may sound, I do believe most people who are depressed and constantly think about killing themselves are just looking for this kind of attention that you're giving them. They wanna be pitied because they've put themselves in a place mentally where they think everyone else's opinion is what truly matters and that you're nothing alone. It truly is the weakest place I believe a human can be, and I do believe it should be considered it's own deadly sin.

I feel like to resolve the situation of such feelings it needs to be addressed to them the position they are in, and then proceed with ignorance. 99% of people who are "going to kill themselves" don't. And if you quit feeding their attention-hungry minds they will never grow strong enough to realize that yourself as a person is the strongest motivation to everything you do in life, and you're only worth as much as you believe you are.

All in all though, it is a nice emotional piece of poetry. And I'm just some guy ranting my emotions and beliefs.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I think it's okay to rant and preech. As long as you get what you needed to say, out. :aww:
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aXsKezia Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
*nods* And I do respect the people who have been put into a place mentally where they do believe that the pain of life would be better silenced. Those aren't the people my rant was for. But I'm just saying that's a vast minority on the attention-seekers.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, okay.
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aXsKezia Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
that's a vast minority compared to the attention-seekers*
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ahsae Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
some of them maybe but it would be unfair to say that about all deppressed ppl ..un like others who want attention there are some seriously damaged ppl in this world who truly believe that their pain would only end with their own death ..now i am not an expert or a psychiatrist or any thing but i think this picture might get a smile out of one of these ppl this picture just might remind them get through this day just this day..
and as for those who need attention they just want someone to tell them its okay and this shit happens to anyone ..and i dont see why they cant be told that..
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darkcentaur Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think your kind of right. My own experiences showed me that these persons haven't enough selftrust and love the much easyer way to add themselves to one person and let this one do all the things that have to do with the mean world.

But if you are the only one for this person, and you know that he tried it again and again, hurt himself, tried to kill himself. How would you live with it, if he kills himself? If you thought he was just trying to get attention and won't do it.
I've been going through this many times, and the fear is always there.
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ahsae Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i guss it would be better to get professional help in this case...
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darkcentaur Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mhm, exactly what I think. But it isn't always possible..
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niewolnica Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011
Thank you.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :aww:
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DarknessTare Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
The idea is very nice, I'm just a bit concerned with the 'nobody cares'-part, it's seems a tad depressing to me.

I got the whole message behind and I noticed how it seems to have helped some people in the comment-session, but wouldn't it help a but more by stating something more positive like; "You don't think people would care, but you're wrong" or something like that, just to make said suicidal people a bit more joyful in mind and actually realize just more than one person cares for them and their lives? This is just my opinion of course ^^;

To me, suicide is the most selfish and thoughtless act man could ever commit, if you ask me, so it's nice that it's actually helpful to somebody who are in fact considering this! My mother's cousin did this, because he was having money-issues, but it's tragic because these people don't realize all the individuals they leave behind; wondering why they deserved that sort of pain and why they weren't allowed to be involved.

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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry if it were depressing.
The first stanza is someone contemplating suicide. The rest are about some one from my story. Maybe I sould put that in the description. it's based off of that.

I apologize for misconception when you read this. :(
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DarknessTare Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think that'd be best, so that people will understand the meaning a bit better ^^;
And as I said I understood the message to it, I just thought it may seem more, I dunno, lively if you edited a bit. But you don't have to, that was just my opinion after all.
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darkcentaur Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think most of them exactly know how many people suffer under their decision. But on a certain point, they think somewhat like 'it's my choice, my decision, and they're all strong enough for life, so they will be strong enough to get over it.'
Somewhat like that was always the answer, when I asked them.
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DarknessTare Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Guess you're right. They seem to be enjoying the negative attention with life at stake without caring a thing.
I haven't known/don't know many of these people, but it does sound very valid when you say it.
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darkcentaur Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't know many of them either, but the few that I know I use(d) to have a really strong relationship so I think I'm able to understand a little bit how this type of depression functions..
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plathfan910 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011   Writer
This is a really good poem... I like it a lot. Btw, like the TWOLHA shirt you got on there!
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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SinTheGod Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You made me burst into tears...
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:ohnoes: I did?
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SinTheGod Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Of coures you did, this was beautiful.
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xRukiaTheWhiteMoonx Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you! : D
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